Overall Comments This is an interesting submission raising issues of what meaning we want to communicate and how this can be done. In this assignment you have outlined your intentions and these has been underpinned by analysis of your thinking and critical process in developing the ideas. The images indicate that you were comfortable working …
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Overall Comments You have interpreted this assignment in relation to Cartier Bresson and the concept of the decisive moment. From your own research it is apparent that you are aware of other ideas in making images and also of critical views regarding the concept of the decisive moment. The images that you have submitted for …
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Overall Comments The work submitted for this assignment and the exercises carried out indicate a good level of development in your approach to photography. There are still some areas of technical skill in using the camera that need attention as there is a tendency for some of the images to be soft in focusing. In …
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Overall Comments This is the first assignment that you have undertaken to cover the requirements of the course. In doing so you have demonstrated a development of technical skill. You have started to work your way through the recommended exercises and this will help develop your visual awareness and an understanding of the course requirements. …
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